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Post by Steel Sun Aug 14, 2011 1:09 am

Title: Atonement
Author: Steel
Fandom: Buzz Lightyear Of Star Command
Character(s): Commander Nebula, Evil Emperor Zurg, etc.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,336 words
Warning(s): Blood and violence.
Disclaimer: By Disney / Pixar
Summary: Duty comes calling at the new colony Morph for a recently-appointed Commander Nebula when it comes under attack. Little does he know who the real target of the then-unknown alien attacker is and that duty comes calling for a future ranger, as well...

This plot was entirely thought up of by EEZ, set forty or so years before the events of her fic, Beginning of the End, which you should go read if you haven't done so already! I expressed a desire in writing it because it was such an interesting concept and she let me, and I uploaded it on a while back here. We also commissioned Vivz to make art for it here and it came out fantastic!

So now I'm sharing it again with you guys, and I hope you like it!


And that's it! Tell me what you think. Smile

Last edited by Steel on Tue Jun 26, 2012 4:13 am; edited 1 time in total



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Post by SteffieMusings Tue Aug 23, 2011 12:37 pm

I found this to be a powerful piece. My favourite scene would have to be when the alien snatched the baby from the mother, yet didn't harm it in the end after it had made eye contact with him. That connection they had for that moment had definitely added another layer to their relationship.



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