Warp - Awoken

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Warp - Awoken

Post by TessaLovesOzzy on Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:01 pm



Based on the song by WoodenToaster and H8 Seed

I thought of Warp when I heard this song for some reason.

Here are the lyrics
What cause have I to feel glad?
I've built my life on judgement and causing pain
I don't know those eyes I see in the bloodstained chrome
Now everything that I've had
And everything I've known have been thrown away;
And with time, I've come to find this isn't my home

I've stoked the fire
Seen more pain than you can know
The tears of the broken have washed away my soul
Pushed by desire
To change the way my stream will flow
Now I've awoken, and I'm taking back control


I try my best to block out the screams
But they're haunting me in my dreams
Please, break my shackles, I want it to stop

I man these wretched machines
Day in, day out, the grinding wears on my brain
Undermining my sanity, making me question my reality
But life is not as it seems
Should I take a chance for freedom and throw it all down the drain?
I've been imprisoned, please burn my transgressions away

I'm sick of hurting,
Sick of thinking it's all I do
I break those around me, those spared are very few
But the bright sun is burning
And my sky shines, ever blue
Friendships surround me; I'm becoming a part of you


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Re: Warp - Awoken

Post by Falsan on Fri Apr 12, 2013 6:31 am

Not good use of art and graphic work. The wording are best but the picture is not good at all and also not wrapped correctly. I am not discouraging you but i think by doing this you can recognize your mistake for next time.

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Re: Warp - Awoken

Post by Ranger-Nova on Fri Apr 12, 2013 5:22 pm

I wouldn't be so harsh - I think, given the picture appears to be done in Paint, it's pretty good, because Paint is difficult to use to make good art.

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Re: Warp - Awoken

Post by TessaLovesOzzy on Sun Apr 14, 2013 10:55 am

Thanks for your opinions. I'm not the best artist. There are many artists who are better than me. I always thought Warp would at least leave Zurg's employment so thats why I thought of that song I think.

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