Scene from my BLoSC Fanfic series

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Scene from my BLoSC Fanfic series

Post by TessaLovesOzzy on Sat Apr 06, 2013 12:37 pm



A scene from my fan-fiction series "Buzz Lightyear of Star Command: Evil Never Wins". I only have the prologue and first chapter up on DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net, due to my studies. Crying or Very sad

What do you guys think? Where can I improve? Smile

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Re: Scene from my BLoSC Fanfic series

Post by Feral Dog on Sat Apr 06, 2013 1:26 pm

Buzz's head looks a bit squished, and the hip region looks to be on a different angle than the rest of him. On your character, the hands could use some help, but dang near everyone has trouble with those so it's okay, and it's not clear what exactly she is holding- a bat?
Other than that it is pretty cute.

PS, what did you use to draw this? It looks like it was done in Paint, if so there are freeware programs that are more user-friendly and make it easier to get the details you want.
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Re: Scene from my BLoSC Fanfic series

Post by Fox Storm on Sat Apr 06, 2013 6:41 pm

I must tell you this, I'm going to move this topic to the Colored Art section of Fanart because this is done and colored, and it would make it easier for people to find it there, okay?

Moving topic!

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