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Luna Verde

Post by Fox Storm on Sat Aug 13, 2011 5:03 pm

Title: Verde Luna (Made into haikus)
Author: Fox Storm
Fandom: BLoSC
Character(s) / Pairing(s): Ty Parsec
Rating: G
Word Count: 254
Warning(s):  Spoiler for the episodes Wirewolf and Revenge of the Monsters. I don't require you to watch them, but it would be a good idea.
Disclaimer: Disney/Pixar
Summary: A Ranger gets a little visitor who is like him.

———

Deep into the night
a lone figure walks by way
of stars and moonlight

As he walks, he looks
up to see clouds shadowing
the pure and clean moon

He remembers the
night he was infected by
that shadow monster

He remembers the
night he almost destroyed a
barely strong friendship

He remembers the
night he fulfilled his deepest
desire in time

He remembers the
night he had shown redemption for
himself in good time

Whoosh! He stops, feeling
something flutter by his face,
as if to comfort

He turns to see a
large, green, luna moth, flying
by him like a guide

He smiles, glad to
have something by his side that
knew what it was like

What it was like to
have the green moon change him in
more than just one way

The little moth just
silently flew by him right
into the dark night

He stares as the moth
flew deeper into the white
moon forever free

It was unafraid
of the moon, showing off its
light green wings with pride

It was unafraid
of the moon, as if daring
anyone to stop it

Try to stop the moth
It will only soar higher
and make it stronger

"I will not let any
creature stop me from living,
I will keep soaring
!"

This was what the guide
was teaching Ty Parsec, to
accept and let go

A warm glow of new
understanding came from deep
within him, hopeful

"Luna verde", he
said whispering now in a
peaceful state of mind.

———

....I love haikus.


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Re: Luna Verde

Post by Ttone12 on Sat Aug 13, 2011 5:52 pm

I loved this haiku! Very pretty and well written.

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Re: Luna Verde

Post by Fox Storm on Sat Aug 13, 2011 6:29 pm

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed these haikus. They were fun to work on. Smile

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Re: Luna Verde

Post by Steel on Sun Aug 14, 2011 12:07 am

Oh, now that was interesting! I don’t think I’ve ever seen anyone in the fandom write poems, let alone haikus. Pretty neat! You sure like Ty, don’t you? But who am I to talk when the great big purple lug’s snared my attention so? Anyway!

I like the feeling of hope Ty gains from the lunar moth, simply by its persistence in doing what it was meant to do and what it wants to do. I think that after the Wirewolf incident, he’d still be pretty shaken up, maybe for years to come. No organic is meant to turn into a machine, and in such a bizarre warp, he was the one most affected by the change, used and manipulated against his will by NOS-4-A2 like that.

I’d sure love to see more from you whenever you’re up to it!

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Re: Luna Verde

Post by Fox Storm on Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:27 am

Thank you. Really? No one's written haikus yet? I'm kind of surprised, really. I'm new to the fandom, but I always thought someone would have written poems. (shrugs) But I'm not complaining! I'm happy to write poems for this show. Smile

Yes, I like Ty. Smile He can be a bit bothersome when he nags me to write and draw up the plotbunnies and ideas I've got in my head, but he has captured my attention well, and I couldn't be prouder. Nah, no big. I'm happy that Zurg appreciates the attention; Ty already does so. xD

I agree. I think that even though the Wirewolf troubles have passed, he would still be a bit shaken up after all he's been through. I think he'd try to hide it under a strong face, but underneath that tough exterior, he would have a hard time letting go, especially since he was used against his will by NOS-4-A2, and the strain of the transformation that's taken its toll on him. I mean, that scene in Wirewolf, when we see him lying on the floor, in a fetal position,...poor guy. Crying or Very sad But er...(clears throat) anyway!...

I wanted to try to incorporate part of that into these haikus and give him a creature to relate with that was kind of like a kindred spirit to him, in the sense that it's unafraid of being what it was meant to be, to do, and just live, and also for being a creature that does have a connection with the moon. I originally wanted it to be a Phoenix bird to do so, but somehow the luna moth came into these haikus instead, and...well, the rest is history.

And considering some luna moths only live for 7 days after they're hatched from their eggs, I'm not surprised luna moths want to live how they can. But like butterflies, I think moths are very tough little creatures. They can avoid traps, hide themselves, and fly as long as they need to fly to get where they want to go.

I think he deserves a bit of hope and happiness after what's he been through, and how he had proven himself to be what he was meant to be-a Space Ranger, but most importantly, a human.

Heh, I'm blabbing on again. Anyway, thank you again. I'm glad you like the haikus. Smile That's one of the tricks I've got up my sleeve-assuming Ty stops bugging me about it. xD
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Re: Luna Verde

Post by SteffieMusings on Tue Aug 23, 2011 12:23 pm

I find this haiku to be extremely well-written. I take it that Ty is your fave character? Smile
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Re: Luna Verde

Post by Fox Storm on Wed Aug 24, 2011 5:55 pm

Yes! Ty is my fave character, or at least one of them.

Ty: She means I'm her favorite character, period. Cool
Me:....I have nothing to say other than....don't get a big head about it, moptop! I still can mess with ya whenever I want, so meh. Razz
Ty: Rolling Eyes Whatever you say, Fox.

Anyways, thanks! I'm glad you like it. Smile

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Re: Luna Verde

Post by Pythonmelon on Fri Nov 25, 2011 11:04 pm

wow! this is great!

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Re: Luna Verde

Post by Fox Storm on Fri Nov 25, 2011 11:08 pm

Thank you! I'm glad you like these sets of haikus. Smile

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Re: Luna Verde

Post by Pythonmelon on Fri Nov 25, 2011 11:18 pm

welcome~ i was never good at haikus

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