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Nachlor'sha

Post by EEZ on Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:48 pm


*extremely rough draft*
--PROFILE--

Species: Nachlor'sha
Homeworld: Nachlor
Skin Colour: Ranges from soft mocha hues, to dark coffee
Body Definition: Toned and lean
Beliefs: Pantheon of gods and their God-King
Technology: Tier II - Interstellar
Skills and Abilities: Smart, quick to adapt, ruthless, powerful upper body and sharp talons
Weaknesses: Overly zealous, unyielding, short legs
Enemies: Everyone
Allies: None

Interesting Fact: Nachlor'sha is a play on NaCl -- otherwise known as salt, just as Natron is also a play on salt

--PRESENTATION--

The very same species of alien that Natron the Terrible belongs, Nachlor'sha are a cunning and cruel people. Having already established impressive technological feats such as space-flight and world colonization, the Nachlor'sha were quite advanced for their time. As a result, when Natron the Terrible assumed the role of God-King, the merciless tyrant sought to enslave the galaxy and ultimately bend it to his Gods' rule.

Their craft and design is very much similar to the Ancient Egyptians (not in the same galaxy), and they believe that serving their God-King will grant them eternal bliss in the afterlife.
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Re: Nachlor'sha

Post by Fox Storm on Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:21 pm

... Shocked

Wow...he looks like a vicious creature, EEZ. I can totally see its fierceness emitting. Eep!

And I love the name you came up with; it's very clever. ^^

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Post by Steel on Sat Mar 24, 2012 11:05 am

It's funny that most of what you detail is pretty much canon already, hah! Otherwise, I really like the idea of them looking like jackal-like creatures and having an Egyptian-style culture and whatnot. Which is already... canon, again!

But the God-King thing is a really nice touch. It fits with how high and mighty and superior Natron believed himself to be.

How many years would you say passed from Natron's imprisonment to him being found by the LGMs? And do you have any theories as to how the females of their race looked like?

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