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Don't worry about it! If it weren't for the suggestions you keep giving me, I wouldn't know what to write most of the time. They keep me going till the occasions when I actually have ideas of my own.
I will definitely do those two suggestions as soon as possible - plus I have an idea for a Warp chapter which I need to get around to writing.
Your support helps me write, and I really appreciate it!
I will definitely do those two suggestions as soon as possible - plus I have an idea for a Warp chapter which I need to get around to writing.
Your support helps me write, and I really appreciate it!
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Aw! Thanks! I still feel like a spoiled little princess though since you keep taking my ideas.
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I posted my next chapter - Cartoonhottie's already read it (she kindly proofread it for me). I hope you enjoy it.
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OOohhh, I like the latest chapter! Very true in character for our Warpster!
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Finally churned another chapter out! I've been busy lately, but I will find time to write the Nana chapter during next week. I've had to put it off for awhile, but I really want to write it and I'm sure Cartoonhottie's waiting for it (I promise it'll be out soon, honey!)
In the meantime, I hope you enjoy this short chapter: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521360/26/This_and_That
In the meantime, I hope you enjoy this short chapter: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521360/26/This_and_That
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Ouch...those Chlorms are in for it now! That's really mean of them to threaten Mira like that!...well, at least they get karma thrown back at them. XD
Well done! ^^
Well done! ^^
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No problemo! I understand that you have a life outside of here, and take all the time you need sweetie! Great chapter BTW
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Thanks! I'm going to get that chapter done sometime soon, then I'll send it off to you for proof-reading.
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Looking forward to it!
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Just posted the next chapter - FF.net was being a pain though, so I hope all the formatting's okay.
Oh, and the story is now over 20,000 words long. Yay!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521360/27/This_and_That
Oh, and the story is now over 20,000 words long. Yay!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521360/27/This_and_That
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Two more chapters up - here's a link to the latest one: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521360/29/This_and_That
That one's for Steel.
That one's for Steel.
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Oh! I came up with a new chapter, Commander Nebula takes Nana out on a date.
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ooh nice idea.
@ ranger: I was thinking, possibly, a chapter where Booster goes home for a vacation and XR comes to? For some reason I think that would be hilarious
@ ranger: I was thinking, possibly, a chapter where Booster goes home for a vacation and XR comes to? For some reason I think that would be hilarious
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Great ideas, guys! I've got a lot of writing projects going at the moment, but I'll try to find time to write your ideas. They're great.
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yay ^^
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I've reach 30 chapters! Yay! I have another Zurg one for Steel! It's probably awful but I hope she likes it.
It's a bit darker than most of the others. It's about the first time Zurg killed someone personally. So, yeah, kind of dark. And badly written.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521360/30/This_and_That
It's a bit darker than most of the others. It's about the first time Zurg killed someone personally. So, yeah, kind of dark. And badly written.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521360/30/This_and_That
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Sorry for the double-post, but here's another chapter: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521360/31/This_and_That
I've also got another Booster/Sally (the pairing has been dubbed "Diner" by Alexa) story up on FF.net.
I've also got another Booster/Sally (the pairing has been dubbed "Diner" by Alexa) story up on FF.net.
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Hooray! The first story featuring Sprocket Crockett the younger brother of Rocket Crockett! 8D I really love how we took a background character and gave them a name and personality~.
Good story as usual~. I would have liked a bit more detail, though. Showing rather than telling and all that.
You should totes write up what happens at the family barbeque~. Teehee~.
Good story as usual~. I would have liked a bit more detail, though. Showing rather than telling and all that.
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I wish I'd remembered to give you credit for his name - he was your idea, after all.
And yes, more detail would have been good. I just have this problem with humorous stories... when I'm writing something serious, it's easy to add details, but if I'm writing something that isn't serious, I don't take the writing as seriously. I'm trying to correct this, but my mind still seizes up when I try to add detail to humorous stories.
Oh great, I'm so busy already and you give me yet another thing to write. XD
And yes, more detail would have been good. I just have this problem with humorous stories... when I'm writing something serious, it's easy to add details, but if I'm writing something that isn't serious, I don't take the writing as seriously. I'm trying to correct this, but my mind still seizes up when I try to add detail to humorous stories.
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I reorganised your first post to help new readers get into it. Hope you don't mind~
I skim-read a few oneshots along the way and liked what I saw, but I'll read them properly and give you a proper review when I'm not so busy with packing. Cheers.
I skim-read a few oneshots along the way and liked what I saw, but I'll read them properly and give you a proper review when I'm not so busy with packing. Cheers.
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I don't mind at all. Thanks.
Noooooo... you've been reading them. D: *dies of embarrassment*
A review? That would be most lovely. Feel free to give criticism (I know there's sooo much that needs improving), it will be greatly appreciated.
Noooooo... you've been reading them. D: *dies of embarrassment*
A review? That would be most lovely. Feel free to give criticism (I know there's sooo much that needs improving), it will be greatly appreciated.
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Oh posh, your story is perfect!
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Noooo, it isn't. Especially the early chapters. They're awful. But thanks for the compliments, hon - if it weren't for you, I would have lost inspiration a long time ago.
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Honey, you really don't give yourself enough credit. Your story is perfect and has alot of followers. In fact, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Another chapter is up! Soon I will write those lovely ideas you guys have given me.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521360/32/This_and_That
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521360/32/This_and_That
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